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Today i uploaded the prduction logos also me and Danny took
a look at our title sequence and how we can improve it. Me and Danny came
to a conclusion to use the Warner Bros company at the begining of our film
because it is popular with films like The Godfather and others. Me and Danny
are quite annoyed at the fact one of our member went M.I.A but it happens and
me and Danny are trying to deal with it.
It's not Shaun's fault he got injured! Add more detail to posts like this - what exactly did you look at improving and what did you decide?
ReplyDeleteOverall your blog is OK Ola, but there are a few things you need to improve on if you want to get into the upper grade levels:
ReplyDelete1. Add a label gadget and label all posts.
2. Use spell check and check grammar of all posts carefully - there are LOTS of mistakes.
3. Add more analysis, of the production process and decisions but also you are missing a lot of the early analytical research tasks.